The world works in two ways,
Give and take.
If you've got something, something else will be taken away.
But what if you have nothing... or you want nothing? Nothing can be taken away, right?
This story looks like it could become something great. I read through your prologue and your first chapter and I like the progress so far. I hope you continue with it and please let me know if you do!
Nothing to review yet, but I'd like to point out that I liked the tagline -- it raises the idea of somebody breaking a very fundamental system, and that is a good idea for fiction.
So.... I guess I should write SOMETHING about myself here... But urm... Im unsure what to write so here are some random details about me!
Name: Tabassum
Grade: 11
Birthday: April 26 (Ta.. more..