Friendship

A poem about friendship...

Friendship…

It isn’t a big
Thing…
It’s a million
Little things…

And a friend…

Is the best
Thing anyone
Could ever
Have…

Someone…

Who isn’t going
To just say
“F**k it”
And never speak
To you again
Because times
Get tough…

Someone…

Who will be there
For you…

Forever and always…

Someone…

Who understand you…
Who understands
That you’ll have
Good day…

And bad days…

And sometimes…

Even in the
Greatest of
Friendship….

You’ll say stuff
That you don’t
Really mean…

But a real friend…

Will forgive you…
And love you still…

They are the people
Who will accept you
For you…

They are the people
Who love you
For who you are…

Instead of for
Who you’re
Not…

One rose could
Be my garden…

And…

One friend
Can be my
World…

A friend…

Is someone
Who knows
All about you…

But they
Still love
You…

They never get
In your
Way…

Unless…

You’re falling
Down…

Friends are
The people who
Won’t leave you alone…

When they know
You’re not okay…

Sometimes…

You have to run
Away…

Just to see…

Who will follow
You…

And true friends
Always will…

Author's Note

What do you think? I'm sure this is horrible...

Reviews

[Fuego31]

I absolutely love the line "One rose could be my garden". That really spoke to me. Like Sacha said, give yourself more credit. You're a fantastic poet!

[}Echo{]

Thank you so so much!!

[}Echo{]

Thank you so so much!!

[Sacha Davison]

Don't be so sure, Adriana! You should give yourself more credit, this is great! I like the point you make with :
Sometimes…

You have to run
Away…

Just to see…

Who will follow
You…

And true friends
Always will…

I think that is so very true! This is a very easy piece for nearly anyone to relate to. Keep it up!

[}Echo{]

Thank you very much for all the wonderful reviews! :)

[Sacha Davison]

No problem, sorry for the delay on reading these! I'm gonna try to do the majority of my read requests tonight!

[}Echo{]

Thanks. It's fine. Haha, cool. :)

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I don't think it's horrible. I really love it

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Thank you. :)

[Bound In Red]

This is a wonderful work of art. I would put all the parts i loved but then it would be the whole thing! You have a real talent for this.

[}Echo{]

Thank you so much for the wonderful reviews! :)

[Bound In Red]

Always welcome. :)

[}Echo{]

:)

[luviva]

absolutely right!
those are the little pieaces that make up friendship
loved the line, "afriend to me is a world" and i agree
i would rather have a single friend who will never live my side rather than having lots of them who will flee when times r hard!!

[}Echo{]

Thanks a lot! :)

[InsanityWriter]

I love it. :) Your poems hold such truth in them, especially this one. Friendship is truly wonderful and magical!

[}Echo{]

Thanks! :) Thank you a lot, you're reviews mean a lot! :)