I'm Sorry...

Yeah...

 

I promised you I’d stop…

That I’d never do it again…

But couldn’t take this s**t,

So I broke my promise again…

 

I’m sorry…

I'm really sorry...

 

It’s pointless,

It’s stupid,

I have no reason to live,

It’s obvious I can’t stop,

So maybe I’ll just put it to an end…

 

I’m Sorry...

 

Do you hate me?

Am I hopeless?

Am I all alone?

Do you think everyone would be

So much better off

If I was gone?

 

I’m sorry…

 

I promise you

I’ll stop,

That I’ll never do it again,

It may take a while,

But I hope you’ll love me to the end…

 

I’m sorry…

I'm really sorry...

Reviews

[Misillusions]

Wow...judging by your profile I'll say that I'm glad that phase of your life is over.
I think the world always needs talented writers that can convey powerful messages like this piece does.
Good job

[Fuego31]

Wow, I'm fighting off crying as I write this. That hit really close to home. If this is how you really feel and you need someone to talk to, message me. It immediately made me start worrying for your well-being. Whether this is how you're feeling or not, well done and bravo. It was gripping. Just wow.

[}Echo{]

Wow, thanks. Yeah, until like the last week, I couldn't go a day without the thought of suicide crossing my mind... Thanks a lot, that's really really nice. Thanks so much.

[Not Your Typical New Yo..]

Stunning, gripping, over the edge, raw. I like how it repeats, as if you were really sorry for the mistake you did. But we all make mistakes, even we learn from them we still tend to do stupid things.

[}Echo{]

Thanks. Yeah.. Yeah, I guess.. Thanks for the reviews!!

[luviva]

very gripping and gets the reader's mind at war trying to figure out y you are sorry before reading the next chapter. loved it!!

[}Echo{]

Thanks! :)

[Sacha Davison]

Very gripping, chilling piece. I relate to this on a quite personal level and can almost imagine someone specific reciting this poem to me. It nearly causes my heart to skip a beat. Thank you so much for sharing this, I do not regret taking the time to read it!

[}Echo{]

Thank you so much! :)

[Sacha Davison]

You're quite welcome! :) Send me a read request any time you'd like, I enjoy reading your work!

[}Echo{]

Thank you! Thanks, and you can send me any read request any time, too, I really like your writing style. :)

[Sacha Davison]

Thank you very much! I'm quite flattered! I enjoy your writing style as well! :)

[}Echo{]

:D

[NaugleB]

profound

[}Echo{]

Thanks! :)

[breezes]

Well done. You've given me inspiration with this piece.

[}Echo{]

:)

[ms. barrie]

this is an incredible write, almost lyrical. wonderful flow, and rhyme. your words and how you used them painted a picture of such dark sorrow (almost anger) and regret. though extremely emotionally dark, you were able to make this relateable, as i find this slightly endearing... at least to me. great write!

[}Echo{]

Thank you so much! :)

[ms. barrie]

you welcome :)

[}Echo{]

:)

[marie]

wow.... its almost like an echo in my head sort of like when a song is stuck in your head and you can't get it out only you leave me instead with and emotion that lingers. i can almost hear the said person chanting "i'm sorry" in my ears its eerie but it is also love filled for one can only truly be sorry to one that they love can they not?

[}Echo{]

Yeah.. Thanks for the review! :)

[marie]

no problem i enjoyed reading it :)

[}Echo{]

:)

[Kyle Sky]

The impression of the whole piece was overwhelming.

[}Echo{]

Is that a good thing or a bad thing...?

[Ethale Captor]

I agree with the previous comment. It was overwhelming the emotion that flowed forth from such frail words. I believe it was beautiful and well written.

[}Echo{]

Thank you so much! :)

[Ethale Captor]

No problem.

[}Echo{]

:)

[Kyle Sky]

it's a good thing thing. :)

[}Echo{]

Okay, thanks. :)