Then and Now

Idk...

I used to be resilient,

I used to be a rebel,

I used to never cry,

Not a tear to my eye.

But I made the mistake of trusting,

I trusted someone new,

And now my heart is broken,

And soon I will be, too…

I feel lost,

I feel alone,

I feel like I just want to be gone,

All alone in this world,

Lost alone forever,

Because of you…

Reviews

[Kyle Sky]

Truly beautiful. The flow of the verse was beautiful and the words melded perfectly with the emtion.

[}Echo{]

Thanks a lot! :)

[Sacha Davison]

This flows excellently. Very easy poem for the most readers to connect to, I'd say. Another good poem! Keep it up!

[}Echo{]

Thanks a lot! You too! :)

[ms. barrie]

beautiful, eloquently written, full of sorrow and regret, longings. speaks to most hearts, as we've all be there, are there, due to continuing wanting to keep trusting. i love the rhythm and flow to this...it's almost lyrical. i really enjoy your writing style. keep writing :)

[}Echo{]

Thanks for the reviews! You too. :)

[Hannah Messer]

"And now my heart is broken, and soon I will be too..." I love that.

[}Echo{]

Thanks you so much for the review! :)

[Sir Jaykom]

Nicely written.

[scripted]

this is a good peom shows emosion and heart break love how you express your feeling in everything you write!!!

[Damien Davison]

I thought it was good, when you rhymed the new and too the flow was flawless, could've used another rhyme after new and too, such as rhyming the gone with something, or something... If you know what I mean. Good job though!

[}Echo{]

Yeah, I couldn't think of how to write it with another rhyme... Thansk! :)