Warned

This is a cheesy poem that I have actually managed to get published. I don't think it's very good, but yeah..

You were warned,

Stubborn One,

Warned You Would Pay,

Now It's All

Clear as Day,

Your Nightmares

Are Living
Sucking Your Life Away
And Soon

You Will Pay

Reviews

[ms. barrie]

very foreboding, this poem reminds me of karma's voice warning someone of the heavy debt they'll have to pay in their next life. brilliant poem. not surprised it got published :)

[}Echo{]

thannks s allot

[ms. barrie]

you welcome a lot

[}Echo{]

:)

[ms. barrie]

;)

[Bare Trees]

There is nothing worse than nightmares coming to life. Good one, and glad to see you've been published.

[}Echo{]

Thanks. :)

[marie]

great job, i love it :)

[Kyle Sky]

Very eerie in verse. Good job. I like it.