Chapter 3

Chapter 3

A Chapter by }Echo{

I am so sick of these doctors! They know nothing! They have no answers about what's wrong with Iggy. They have no answers about when Iggy if-when-Iggy is going to wake up! They are doctors! Isn't it their job to know what the f**k is going on?! I swear if I don't get some answers like now I cannot be responsible for what unfortunate things will happen to these idiots!

I sent the rest of my flock to a cave a couple miles from the hospital, but I refuse to leave unless Iggy is with me. I have been here four days! Four days! He has been unconscious for four days! He has not even moved in four days! And the b***h nurse laughed at me because Iggy's heart monitor thingy, the thing that says how fast his heart is beating, yeah it started beeping really really loud and said that Iggy had no pulse! That his heart was not even beating! So I started freaking thinking he had died and actually the thing had just disconnected, but somehow me thinking that he was dead was frickin hilarious! I thought that he was dead! I really thought that he was gone, and they thought it was funny! How is that funny in any way? How?! That is not funny, at all.

I don't know what I am going to do, but I am about to lose the tiny bit of sanity that I still have and I am going to go a-wall on some doctors if they don't figure out something! They should at least be able to tell me why he's in a coma! I am at my breaking point. I am crying! I never cry and I feel like such a dork for crying, but I can't help it.

All I want is for Iggy to be okay. That's all I want. I don't care about Fang being gone, I don't care about Ari being gone forever, I don't care about anything except for Iggy to be okay, for him to be alive, and okay, and for him to still be here.

I had to figure out what was going on. It didn't make sense. The flock said that there was nothing, and then they were just being hit repeatedly and they couldn't fight back. Erasers weren't like that, and it couldn't have been something the white coats created because they would've taken them, not just beat the s**t out of them and left them…I think…

I don't know who it could be though. I mean, the school is who is always after us…I mean it was a hit and run. Just regular human dumbasses couldn't have done this much damage…but I don't know what could do this much damage….whatever or whoever is, is going to pay though. They will pay for hurting my flock, my family…

I need to go check on the flock, but what if when I was gone he woke up and he was all alone? Or what if when I was gone something happened and he was gone forever? I can't risk that…I have invested on cell phones and like everything hour or so I call to check on Gazzy, Angel, Nudge, and Total, and as long as they answer and they let me know they're okay then I don't worry so much.

I stepped out into the hallway, and took out the phone, flipping it open to dial the number. Suddenly something covered my face from behind, I instantly tried to turn to fight, but I was instantly hit in the face with something that felt like a brick wall. I shrieked, and stumbled backwards, trying to get a grip on things so I could defend myself.

I turned and tried to kick, but once again it felt like I hit a brick wall. I felt rough hands grab me and pin me to the ground, and I heard mumbling that I couldn't understand. WTF? Could somebody just get kidnapped in the middle of a hospital and nobody think anything about it?!

I kicked out again, and tried to throw a punch, and something really hard came down on the back off my neck, and I fell to the floor, falling into the comfort of darkness…



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And the plot thickens.... Great job:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Smooth and slowly rising in action is how i describe this. There was not much action or events in this chapter but it still is good. Also, the imagery in the last two paragraphs is decent and supplies enough detail for the reader to comprehend what is happening in decent manner.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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