The World

What the world sounds/looks like to me.

Opening and closing

The door of all portals

shutting the good

Opening the bad

All is at a state of un-rest

people dieing

People crying

Disturbed is all

Reviews

[Stephen Ownby]

True. Very true. Nice rhyme and some good surreal imagery toward the start of the poem. I think that this could benefit from some more imagery and concrete detail. Great concept, though. I love poetry that points out how twisted our world is.