A Love Lays Dying

Just a free verse for the most part.

 A love lays dying in the bedroom floor,

 She cried as he walks out the door.

 He wanted more than what she was,

 yet he loved her.

 He was a walking contradiction,

 such a man w***e.

 He had to take her and break her,

 'til he left nothing more.

 Watching through the window,

 she thinks of all they had,

 all she thought they would be,

 was now only a memory.

 "Why?", she screams as she dances to the floor,

 " All I wanted was love and I little hope to endure."

  With that said, she took her last breath and died.

Author's Note

It's not all that great; I just wanted to post something so it wasn't blank. Honestly, what do you think? I'll post my better work when I get the chance.

Reviews

[Im a reel vamp lover]

Beautiful hun i love it!!

[Kyle]

You show some real skill here. I like how this one ended. I wasnt expecting that...

[MoriartyMesa]

Kind of reminded me of ACE OF BASE.