Uglier Than Ever Before

A poem I wrote not too long ago...

Uglier than ever before

Troubles taunt me

And throw me to the floor

I don't know which way to go

Do I stay or leave a note on the door?

So what do you want me to say?

Should I act like I'm not sore?

What do you want me to do?

Pretend you're the same as before?

No

Wether it's the inside or out

Things here are ugly

Uglier than ever before

I'm stuck with what I have

Why can't I be happy anymore?

You throw a lot of punches my way

Wether you realize it or not

Why don't you talk to me face to face huh?

Instead of pretending things are the same as before

The music plays through my head

And it blares through the doors

If you want this to be over,

If you don't want to be friends anymore,

Im game

But stop trying to make me feel bad

Because maybe you don't realize it

But my life is ugly

Uglier than ever before

Reviews

[zainul]

I like the way you tell your story.
But,a little explanation may help understand the real crisis in it.

[Ash]

Thank you. I wasn't sure how to make it more in-depth, so I just posted it like this..

[zainul]

You are most welcome.
Just work on creating other poems.
You may edit or retouch this piece later when new ideas will come.

[Ash]

Yeah, I will.

[zainul]

Thanks a lot

[Ash]

:)

[Steve]

Lots of honesty and power here. I like it. I hope this made you feel good writing it. Sometimes this kind of write can be good therapy.

[Geon Quuin]

Contempt. Regret. Anger. I really liked it. Good write.

[Ash]

Thanks for the review.

[Nithin Purple]

NIce here sharing emotions:) like the presentation:)

[Ash]

Thanks. :)

[Nithin Purple]

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