If Love is Just Silly

just something for fun :)

If love is just silly,
then weapons are dumb.
Forget ammunition,
shoot roses, not guns.

War harms the strongest,
peace mends the wounds.
If love is the weapon,
we'll be free soon.

Author's Note

this is really just for fun, it just kinda popped into my head. nonetheless, rates and reviews would be beautiful :)

Reviews

[PaperHearts]

I really like this! There's nothing about this poem that doesn't work, and I think that you've done an amazing job in fitting everything together perfectly. This poem is full of truth and wisdom, and I think that everyone who reads this will take something away from it. :)
~PaperHearts

[Silent Soul]

WAR! what the hell are we fighting for?

same today as it was when it was first screamed at the top of some poor hippies lungs! :)


good short.

l8r g8r
s.s.

[Electric Fascination]

awwww this is cute (:

[Jennika has a short att..]

Really awesome poem. 100/100

[Kelley]

Like a flower child you are....smiles
I liked it!!!

[Jessica]

This is amazing. I love the message behind it, and this is definately going into my favorites!
100/100 Great write!

--Jess:)

[The Last Poetic King]

Yeah I do like this, but I have to say. We will never see peace on this planet, it is because we our not ready to change as a whole. We change individually, which causes more problems. It surfaces mainly because we differ from the ones who do not support our idealistic thoughts. So it targets controversy within us, and we take it out on those who fail to understand. Yet all and all, this piece was very good.

[Lost, n'MT]

Wow, I was working on a piece VERY similar to this theme last night off the top of my head. The message this poem sends is what I love and I lost how you turned a positive message into a wonderful write, thank you for sharing. I enjoyed this very much and I am beyond impressed that this writing of yours that just popped up in your head. Very well written but even a better message which I cannot understand. Loved this.

[Hippy]

i like this if love was our weapon if it was every ones weapon then we would be all at peace and we could understand others better then just imposing our views on others we would rationalize instead good peice