Just One More Time

Darling, we had it all.
the sky
the stars
and more.
you were so perfect,
so good to me.
you told me you loved me, and i trusted you.

i remember it like it was yesterday

( ( [ i wish it was yesterday ] ) )

i remember your love.... ♥

how could you hurt me?
i hate missing you.

you were so special,
i remember when this pen could only write your name
and now, all it writes are words of
                          l
                           o   
                             n
                               e
                                 l
                                   i 
                                    n
                                      e
                                        s
                                          s.
                p
              a
             i
           n.                 
 
                            m
                             i
                             s
                             e
                             r
                             y. 


i just want your arms around me
just one more time.
just tell me you love me
so i can smile,

*just one more time*

Author's Note

this is the first time i ever used different fonts and stuff like that, so tell me what ya think???

Reviews

[heido]

Less is more.
I like the sequence of words that drop down the page though.

[Wicahpi]

Cool! I wish we could actually use different fonts!!!
I do on my word...but when pasted...if you don't have the font,
you don't see it! This was a fun read, though sad, I like the 'dancing'
form of it.

[Electric Fascination]

I love this! Its really relatable, and I love the way it was written out with the fonts and the falling words (:

[Silent Soul]

I think the randomness really makes it shine. The way your scattered thoughts of pain were scattered in the writing worked very well and made for a pleasant look and feel. Very good read. keep it up!

s.s.