Skeletons

Skeletons in my closet
why cant i stop this?

scars on my arm
do me no harm.

friends say they care
but just cant be there

dont want to lie
just have to get by

secrets to keep
cry as i sleep.

all angel no wings
is this what life brings?

never ending why
running out of time.

want to be free
stuck within me.

judged far too much
cringe at your touch.

live day to day
stay out of the haze.

ignorant voices
making my choices.

dont care what they say
ill find my own way.

Reviews

[Hollywood]

Favorite lines: "ignorant voices
making my choices.

dont care what they say
ill find my own way." Very well written, there are so many emotions in this poem.

[Ian]

Its like a bunch of things is falling on you from my point of view
beautiful poem because i can imagine it just seeing whats filling you up
and your finally saying i dont need this i can move on. Great Job.

[Emily Quinn]

good poem, the seventh stanza doesnt rhyme as effectively as the others but it flows quite nicely nevertheless. good emotion, judged was spelt wrong but thats just minor editing. nice style, like it- thumbs up

[Jennika has a short att..]

Love it! "don't care what they say i'll find my own way"-beautiful.

[The Wave]

nice!

had a good flow to this, the first stanza didnt seem to rhyme in the same way as the others following tho..

overall, not bad! i was distracted by the word "juged" --do you mean judged? and i think the stanza "want to be free, but i'm only me" may sound better if it was "want to be free, but im stuck within me"
nice emotions in this,
good job

[i'mHiding]

I love itt,
"Judged for too much,
Cringe at your touch"
Beautiful :)