Screaming Scars

a voice so loud
like a gunshot.
hits me over and over
just when i think im broken
done for, finished...
you help me up again
heal me, hold me
make me feel as if nothing happened
nothing will ever happen again..
until im "wrong" again
i get shot again
that voice so harsh, loud, unknowing
makes me scream
makes me cry
makes me angry
want to die...
some scars dont show
some wounds dont heal
youll never understand this pain i feel.

Reviews

[sugar09]

U pput sum heart in that mug all pretty gud

[Coyote Poetry]

This poem speak anger and disappointment. Verbal abuse can push someone away from you forever. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Robert Erickson]

"dont for, finished..." done for?
This is pretty good. I would add some better capitalization and punctuation. The persistent erratic commas are unnecessary, a poem does not need any at all, but if you choose to use them I believe it would be best to use them correctly. Other than that, I think that it could use some more descriptive words in order to paint the picture vividly.