I Loved You, I Hate You

your eyes,
they glow,
with all the hate i know.
i love you,
i miss you,
why did you have to leave?

your lips,
they speak,
all the lies i believed.
you liar,
you traitor,
you messed me up inside.

my soul,
it cries,
but now the tears have dried.
the rain drops,
it drips down,
washes away my pain.

my eyes,
they flow,
with all the hate i know.
i loved you,
i hate you,
its time to let you go.

Reviews

[Luna]

Stinkingbuckets, what is your problem? Writing is a release of the soul, of feelings. Maybe if you got a heart you might understand, hm? And there is nothing wrong with the movie Titanic! It was the top selling movie ever until Avatar came along. You really have no write to critique what people think, considering you came up with a horrible name to call yourself on the site. Maybe it shows your personality, or better yet, the lack there of. And wearing a tie shows class, something that you obviously don't have if you think he is a dud? What are you, a forty year old who lives on his mother's couch in the basement?

Anyway, onto the poem. I myself don't believe in teen love but I believe it is possible. So many people believe they are in love and it tends to flip on a turn of a dime. This poem shows it. Very lovely write.

[rockinmiley555]

whats wrong with being a teenager and thinking your in love? its the best feeling in the world... until it ends. this happened to me, and it happened to her (maybe, idk). she just needed to vent about it. :) i liked it

[stinkingbuckets]

I don't mean to be harsh, but this is sort of cliche poetry. I am not sure of your age, but I would venture you are in your early to mid teens, love movies like titanic, and this poem is about some boy you thought you were in love with but now hate because he liked your friend better. btw, who's the dud in a tie who reviewed this first? seriously... my dad wears a tie. loser.