Three meaningful words.

There is too much pain deep down inside
All I want to do is hide
I want to crawl into myself and die
If I killed myself, you'd probably question why
I want us to be together, can't you see
But it is impossible for us to be
Our relationship is growing stronger
I hope it will last a whole lot longer
As I lie here with my knife
It thretens to end my life
My life is starting to fall
With one deep slice I could end it all
But I can't. It's like you were sent from above
You give off a vibe of kindness and love
Each day it feels like a piece of me is missing
I want to feel us intertwined and kissing
All I want to do
Is lay down beside you
I'd bury my face into your shoulder
And wish that moment was never over
If only you you were near
I could whisper in your ear
All the things I would like to do
But most of all that I love you

Reviews

[Andrew'sWonderland]

A beautiful write!!!
You have quite the complex setup: Love shrouded in Darkness!
The flow is amazing and this was truly a pleasure to read!
You definitely have talent!!

[Kathryn Star, Shine!]

Dark... ks

[Shayde Carttr]

Great poem. It reads with great flow and is very sharp - vivid.

-shayde

[V. Lucien Maier]

Very sharp. good flow

[RYGON MASK]

muy bien