Flash

Inspired by a movie i just watched. it was about a person who..well...his life just flashed by and he didnt get the chance to live it. I'm not done with this one...or i dont think i am, I hope to come back and finish it.

 

Flash


  Living life in the fast lane

Never accpeting to change lanes

Always looking ahead

Looking around like your still in the lead

But your to fast to realize

Your way ahead of the rain

Stopped at the tracks

Watched the trains flash past....

Hard to explain when so much was left in vain....

No reason to remain when

Your livin life in the fast lane.

flashing back to some many times before

lost 

like no where to go

no where to turn

no signs 

no place

like standing still in time.

 

 

 

Author's Note

Ignore the grammar problems and what not. Just tell me what you think :]

Reviews

[Krimson]

i love the use of imargery that appeared in this poem. i felt so connected to it. i love it, it was indeed a good read ^^

[Bella]

I really liked this! It was great to read, because I felt like I could relate to this feeling.

[QuietPoet]

I like it. But you should def add more. :)