Window of Opportunity

about people like me, the ones that are always left out in the cold.

  The "Window of Opportunity"

Were on the outside looking in

Craving what they've already craved and achieved

Beggin for just a crum of their sucess.

Hating the way they cump down on their cash

Licking their fingers as if it was some fast food.

Fast break for people who've already hit the top

For us its just another 12 hour day with me looking 

Far from the start of the�bottom to the top

I guess good guys or good women are never the ones to make it that far.


Thats why our window of opportunity is always the one to never open


Life abolishes people who can not suceed with in it.

Author's Note

Ignore the problems in it, just try n see what i'm tryin to say and just tell me what you think :]

Reviews

[K C Scott]

This is good. I had to read it a couple times to try to grasp what I thought it to be about--which is always fun. Sounds like you look down upon the very thing we are all taught to look up to. And that societies version of success is similar to selling your soul. The only way to survive is to step on all the backs that lead to the top; therfore the good get walked on, and the bad...well....rule the world!
Again, very good write! I look forward to reading more.
Was I close?
:)

[Ms Jessica Renee]

Even if with a flaw, the message behind your words comes out.
You certainly know how to write and express your feelings just right.
Bravo.

[Snits]

pretty snazzy. i like this one. keep up these types of poems...they seem to work better for you

[QuietPoet]

I like it. I totally get where you are coming from.