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I can't help it: you are just too delicious.

Those honey eyes have captured me in their sweetness

And though I struggle and struggle

I simply can't escape.

Here's the question: do I really want to?

You are, after all, beautiful.

No doubt about it, you are beautiful

Such a pretty boy with such a pretty face

And all I want to do is memorize that face

To draw it close to mine

Close enough that I can feel your sweet hot breath

And I want to kiss you

And taste you

And make you mine

If only for a moment, if only for a night.

I should not feel this way. I should not want this so badly.

Oh, but I do!

You are just too delicious.

Author's Note

Written over the summer. Reviews are nice :)

Reviews

[Nontani]

I like the idea of this. While some of the repetition you put in this poem has a great effect, other times, the repetition can be a little cliche. I like how you wrapped up the ending though. Very cute. Very powerful.

Frozen Angel