Untouchable

Unrequited love. Not about who you think it's about if you know me, for the record.

They say it's the truth

But it's still pretty sad

I always want 

What I can't have

And you belong to her

So I can't have you

Oh, but if I could do 

What I want to do

I'd track you down

I'd kiss you in the rain

It'd be different 

But it'd feel like the same

You'd hold my hand

And hold me tight

And for the first time in forever 

I'd feel alright

 

I wish you noticed, oh, I wish you knew

Just how much I care about you

Yeah, I only wish you'd open your eyes and see

That I think of you all day and night

I can't be happy without you by my side

And maybe you'd be happier with me

But she's still the one who's holding your heart

You think she's pretty and you think she's smart

And she's everything that I could never be

Everything that I could never be

 

They say I'm pathetic

But I know better

I only want

For us to be together

But you don't feel it

So things won't change

Even though I hate it

When they stay the same

It's not that I hate her

'Cause I'm not a b***h

It's just that you

Have got me bewitched

And I want you bad

Is that such a crime?

That I want you bad

And I want you mine

 

I wish you noticed, oh, I wish you knew

Just how much I care about you

Yeah, I only wish you'd open your eyes and see

That I think of you all day and night

I can't be happy without you by my side

And maybe you'd be happier with me

But she's still the one who's holding your heart

You think she's pretty and you think she's smart

And she's everything that I could never be

Everything that I could never be

 

I look at you with such desperation

And reach out for you

But I know you'll never take my hand

I'm not good for you

She's the kind of girl you like

She's a good girl

With her, you're safe, but I

Could shake up your world

But that doesn't change the fact

That she loves you

It doesn't change the fact

You love her too

 

I wish you noticed, oh, I wish you knew

 

You may think that she's

Unbeatable, unbeatable

But you also don't see that I

I am breakable, oh, I'm breakable

And it's killing me inside

That you're untouchable

Untouchable

 

I wish you noticed, oh, I wish you knew

Just how much I care about you

Yeah, I only wish you'd open your eyes and see

(Untouchable)

That I think of you all day and night

I can't be happy without you by my side

And maybe you'd be happier with me

(Untouchable)

But she's still the one who's holding your heart

You think she's pretty and you think she's smart

And she's everything that I could never be

Everything that I could never be

And you're still untouchable...

Author's Note

I wrote this song about a month ago. Tell me what you think?

Reviews

[Lilith]

The rhyme scheme kind of got on my nerves, since it never had an exact scheme but varied throughout the piece or even throughout a stanza.
Also, each line seemed like a broken thought. I feel like the enter key was used a little too often in this as well.
Not all poetry has to rhyme, which I'm sure you already know. Try revising this piece without the rhyme scheme and re-edit the format of your stanzas. It would look much neater that way, and would be a lot more pleasant to read.