Sweet Uncertainty

Don't you love this feeling?

Eyes lock

Hearts race

Effervescence at an increased pace

And I can't think of anywhere I'd rather be

Because you are

Right next to me

And you're happy to be here

Despite my

Clammy hands

And nervous fear

Biting my lips and

Noticing the sharply defined

Bones of your

Hips

As you smile reassuringly

And gaze at me adoringly

And my fears just melt

And I realize the name of these

Feelings I've felt

As your lips are drawn to mine

And the

Relativity

Of time

Becomes apparent

The seconds turn to minutes to hours to days

As our mouths intertwine

And the moment's all

Mineminemine

It will all be okay

Because my head is below

And my heels are above

And and and and and--

Could this be

 

? 

Author's Note

This is a pretty old poem, written at the beginning of 2009. I still like it, though. Tell me what you think?

Reviews

[Jules]

awww so sweet love new love thats what it makes me think of and i love it too... that anticipation... butterflies awww i miss that feeling im going on a man hunt!!! woot! thanks for the inspiration :D