In My Heart

A poem...

My Love For You,

Grows Stronger
With Each Passing Day,

 

You Are In My Dreams,
My Love,

For In My Heart,
You'll Stay.

 

My Love For You
Is Like A Rose
That Blooms Forth
Everyday.

 

To Shine Forth
My Love,
To Brighten Up
Your Day.

Reviews

[quinfinn]

very sweet and charming write

[~SouthernGirl~]

Thank you.

[David the writer]

Nice job! It was very sweet, short, but it also got across a very complicated message in a simplistic way. Great job.

[~SouthernGirl~]

Thank youvery much! :)

[David the writer]

Np..So I couldn't help but notice you're from the south. I am too :)

[~SouthernGirl~]

Thats cool. :)

[David the writer]

Yeah, I've been on vacation to other places not in the south. It seems a bit simpler here, but it seems more adventurous in those other places

[~SouthernGirl~]

Oh, thats cool. I've been to all of Arkansas' surrounding states. :)

[David the writer]

I've never been to Arkansas. I beleive I've drove through it before, but I've never visted

[~SouthernGirl~]

Parts of Arkansas is beautiful, like up in the mountains. That's cool. ;)

[David the writer]

Oh wow, I'd love to see them. Problem is, my parents only want to visit Branson Missouri.

[~SouthernGirl~]

Yeah, all in the northwest part of Arkansas is goreous.I've been to Branson so many times its not even appealing..

[David the writer]

Lol I know right. I'll have to visit the northwest part of Arkansas later in life. I'm going to go to college in the north, then move west

[~SouthernGirl~]

Haha, yeah. Cool. I'm going to collage up north, too, but I"ll probably stay there, because I have some friends up there.

[David the writer]

Oh yeah? My brother's going to try to go to the college I want to. :D

[~SouthernGirl~]

Yep. Oh, that's cool. What college do you want to go to?

[David the writer]

It's uhm... srry this is embarassing I forgot the name!

[~SouthernGirl~]

Oh, wow... That's nice. I want to go to Penn State

[David the writer]

Penn State? Nice, I was thinking *still am* of Sacremento High

[~SouthernGirl~]

Yep, or a school close to Pittsburgh, because thats where I'll be living.

[~SouthernGirl~]

I also meant to put, that's cool. :)

[David the writer]

I do want to move to California to live. I hear the job rates are higher there, but then again, their population is higher too...

[~SouthernGirl~]

Ah, nice. Cali has a lot of people... Yeah, true.

[David the writer]

(Oh, yeah, Sacramento's a good college from what I've read)

[David the writer]

So, Cali should do nice for me...except I hate hott wheather, but that's okay cause there are more positives about Cali then negatives

[~SouthernGirl~]

Ah, cool. I think there is too many people... I don't like being crowded around a bunch of people... But that's cool.

[David the writer]

I love people. All are so different, and unique atleast in one way

[~SouthernGirl~]

Ah, nice. Well I don't get along with people because I'm really anti-social, and get nervous in social situations... So I'm also usually considered a freak..

[David the writer]

I am too. I joke with people, cause I'm pale like a vampire, and I'm usualy not out in day light, so I tell people I'm a vampire. They already considered me a "freak", but it's nice getting a laugh out of it

[~SouthernGirl~]

Ah, nice. Everyone I know thinks I'm a vampire, because I'm really pale, and don't like being out during the day.

[David the writer]

lol Yeah, funny thing is, alot of my writings actualy deal with vampires

[~SouthernGirl~]

Haha, yeah, I've noticed that. Vampires are awesome.

[David the writer]

Ikr! I only like one movie more than James Bond; Skyfall 007. Noseforouto.

[~SouthernGirl~]

Haha, cool. :)

[David the writer]

It actually scared me, even though it was a silent film

[~SouthernGirl~]

Ah, nice.

[David the writer]

I love vampire stuff like Noseforouto. I just hate Twilight vampires

[~SouthernGirl~]

Yeah. Yeah, Twilight vampires a just fucked up.

[David the writer]

They come out in daylight! Awh, c'mon! And the fact that people will say they are good vampires, I just wanna backhand them!

[~SouthernGirl~]

I know! Yeah, me too.

[David the writer]

I get it's romance, but did they really have to use vampires and werewolves?

[~SouthernGirl~]

Yeah, I know, it's stupid. I like the old vampire movies that are all gory and badass.

[David the writer]

Ikr! Now my generation thinks those ARE vampires, and how vampires ARE supposed

[David the writer]

*supposed to be*

[~SouthernGirl~]

Yeah! If that's the case then I guess no should be afraid if a vampire shows up at their house..

[David the writer]

They'll be like "Jacob!" lol I'd be like "Oh no! Where's my garlic!" lol

[~SouthernGirl~]

Yeah, they'd end up trying to make out with the vampire... Haha, wow.

[David the writer]

Kinda like a pg pornstar!

[~SouthernGirl~]

Hahaha, yep.

[David the writer]

Tis crazy >.>

[~SouthernGirl~]

I know.

[David the writer]

Like no one these days gets who I mean by noseforouto

[~SouthernGirl~]

Yep.

[KeeD]

Radiant, bright and touching.. A great poem. I just watched a movie today that this poem reminded me of. The Movie is titled "The odd life of Timothy Green", its touching and your poem set the mood perfectly, heartfelt and wonderful. Great job.

[~SouthernGirl~]

Thank you so much! :)