Forever and Always...

Forever and Always...

A Poem by ~SouthernGirl~
"

I'm not sure if this should be a song or a poem...

"

Intro:

Forever and Always…

Forever and Always…

Forever and Always…

Bridge:

Forever and always,
I’ll be there for you…

Forever and always,
I’ll love you…

Forever and Always,
I’ll accept you….

Forever and Always,
Us…

Chorus:

Forever and Always…
Forever and Always…
Forever and Always…

We shall always
Be…

You mean so much to me…

Forever and Always…

Unless you don’t want me…

Bridge:

Forever and Always,
I’ll never shut you out…

Forever and Always,
I’ll be yours,
You see…

Forever and Always,
Forever and Always,
Forever and Always,
For you, I’ll be.

Chorus:

Forever and Always…
Forever and Always…
Forever and Always…

We shall be…

You mean so much to me…

Forever and Always…

Unless you don’t want me…

Bridge:

Forever and Always...

It's such an elegant term...

Forever and Always...

Means so much...

Forever and Always...

Can be more than just words...

Forever....

Always....

What did this mean?

Forever and Always...
You see...

Chorus:

Forever and Always…
Forever and Always…
Forever and Always…

We shall be…

You mean so much to me…

Forever and Always…

Unless you don’t want me…

Bridge:

Forever and Always,
It can mean so many things…

Forever and Always,
What do you think?

Forever and Always,
I’ll think of you…

Forever and Always,
Will you, too?

Forever…

What does this mean?

Always…

Do you see?

Chorus

Forever and Always…
Forever and Always...
Forever and Always...

We shall be…

You mean so much to me…

Forever and Always,

Unless you don’t want me…

Bridge:

Are you going to?

Do you understand what I’m saying?

Do you understand how I feel?

Will you be there for me,
With no avail?

 Ending:

Forever and Always…
Forever and Always…
Forever…

Always…

Unless…

Unless you
Forget me...

Forever and Always?
Will you love me?

 

 

© 2012 ~SouthernGirl~


Author's Note

~SouthernGirl~
Um... So what do you think?

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I liked it, it makes me imagine having this conversation with the girl I love, wondering, pleading, knowing, hoping she'll love me back forever and always. To cherish a moment like this is to capture a memory and freeze it in time, that's what this song depicts to me. Only critique I could point out is, the phrasing forever and always is overly used. Although it is the basis of the song, maybe find suitable replacements for it in some parts of the song, otherwise the song would sound to repetitive. Don't get me wrong its a great write, but if it was a song, I'd like to hear some diversity :D 100/100

Posted 12 Years Ago


~SouthernGirl~

12 Years Ago

Thank you. Aw, that's really sweet.

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Added on December 15, 2012
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