Night...

I love the night...

I love night,
I hate day...

 

I cannot wait
For darkness to
Come my way...

 

At dark

Most people
Lock their doors

And close their eyes,

 

But me, I just
Go outside...

 

As you see,
I am different
From most people.

 

I like to sit
Outside at night,
With the stars
And animals...

 

Sitting all alone,
Thinking to myself,

In complete darkness
At night...

 

 

Author's Note

Soooooo this is the first poem I'm going to post on here, and one of the first poems I ever wrote...

Reviews

[Patrick Henry]

I like it..... I can obviously relate because of being up at night, like now, since I was about 5 years old!! lol It matters none that there is snow on the ground, or nowhere to go, or no one to go with. As far as your poem goes, I wish I could find a friend that actually DOES stay up at night, and just sit upon a porch and talk about the silliest parts of my day, and listen to all the little noises that fill the air at night. Pretty little poem, ~SouthernGirl~. xoxo -Mark

[~SouthernGirl~]

Thanks... Haha, yeah. I know what you mean, because I sit on my front porch at night all the time, and I just like to think.... Thank you. ;)

[Rob Santana]

wow. I really really like this poem! I love the darkness too. I come from the streets of Los Angeles,CA. I was always out at and slept in the day. It's how I got my name CREEPER. Cuz I was always CREEPIN' around all night on the streets of L.A. I'm shelving this one in my library. Good job on this one SG..

[~SouthernGirl~]

Thank you so much! ;) Ah, nice. Thanks a lot! ;)

[KeeD]

I'm nocturnal myself, and the city is so beautiful and calm and at peace at night. I live in a really populated country in one of the most busiest cities in the world and only at night can I appreciate its true beauty. I feel myself the most at night, I'm reading this poem right now, and its night :D haha.. good job with this one.

[~SouthernGirl~]

That's cool. Yeah, I live out in the country so all there is is woods. Thank you for the review. :)