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A Poem by [.Marissa.]
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The last words I'm wasting on someone who was never worth it from the start.

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Don me with your crown of sorrow

'Blame it on me'

Give me a dress made of your childish intentions

Give me a mask of the sad face you wear

You can't make sense of the music I play

You could never see what was the truth or lies

Your trust was too true

Someday, I hope you learn the ways of this world

You say you have,

But you haven't come close

For now, live your childish dreams

Your small, unkowing world

© 2009 [.Marissa.]


Author's Note

[.Marissa.]
I hope this made sense. ><

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Just great, no rhymes are needed before wonderful imagination. The feeling by which the main character speaks is the source of the very greatness of this piece. "Give me a mask of the sad face you wear" this line is definitively my favorite, this truly lets the reader know just how tired is the main character of this other person. I applaud!

Posted 15 Years Ago



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[.Marissa.]

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Hello~ I like to write a lot, more than my friends actually. I find a lot of comfort in love stories, so I write them. I hope you enjoy reading pieces of my mind. more..

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