Broken Down

Sad, broken, and crushed

Your heart is filled with fear

How can you move on

Where do you go from here

 

Emotions flowing over

Tears start to fall

He's hurt you before

But never broken down your wall

 

Why is it always you

What have you done

It this a cruel joke

With no place to run

 

Struggle on you must

Until your heart finds love again

Someone has to be your soul-mate

So let the search begin

 

As you start your journey

For the truest love of all

Remember to lead with the heart

And never let him break down your wal

Reviews

[Jills]

I like this, it has a nice flow to it. I also know the feeling all too well of getting close to someone and then having it all backfire on you.

Some pointers: You don't have to capitalize the first word of every sentence, but i actually think that it suits this poem. Also, don't be afraid to throw in some punctuations, like:

"Why is it always you,
What have you done?
It this a cruel joke
with no place to run?"

but that is just a suggestion. Also, you may want to make that "is" instead of "it".
Overall, very nicely done :D

[Manda]

sweet and simple. quite a piece you've got here. its very well written. well expressed =) i really enjoyed it =) great job!!!!! keep up the amazing work

[Undying Glory]

i really like this poem. simple yet pretty elegant and sweet. kind of reminds me of a girl who's just broken up with her boyfriend. great job

[A]

Love this!
"As you start your journey
For the truest love of all
Remember to lead with the heart
And never let him break down your wal"
Great ending and great message overall. Great poem! :)