Dream Theater "Sequence 4"

Welcome back

To another episode

Of Dream Theater

Let's go down the cloudy road

 

Kinda weird I said cloud

As we are led into the sky

Flying way above the roof tops

As high as we can fly

 

Journey through the clouds

Flying along side the birds

Nothing can express this moment

Certainly not a single word

 

Feeling the wind in your hair

Free of all the world

Until you wake up that is

Then comes the next hurdle

 

So you continue to glide

As the clouds begin to gray

Time to get back

With the fresh smell of rain

 

Wow that was fun

Taking in all the sights

The weird thing about it

You've always been afraid of heights

 

Reviews

[Seriana]

Ok, I'm gonna be honest, this one was a bit more of a struggle to get through for me. Almost seemed a bit forced? That said, I think you could present the theme a bit better. One other thing, I think these pieces would flow better if you added some punctuation. Sometimes I get stuck where to pause.
But, other than that, I love this idea of your Dream Theater. Keep it up Brandon, you may end up with a nice little series here!

[Bethany Woody]

Our subconscious is almost always fearless. We do things in dreams we would never do in real life. They are a way for us to act out our violent tendencies without reprocusions, our fantasies without quilts. I think that is basically all this is. Just your subconscious living a life with no fear. It seems a bit short, like there could have perhaps been more detail of the sights you are seeing from a birds eye view. Or maybe a bit of detail why you are afraid of heights, is there an honest reason or is it what they call an irrational fear? This on while good, is not as good as the others in the series. I'd work with it a bit and see what you come up with. I do like the dream itsself.

[Seriana]

Ok, I'm gonna be honest, this one was a bit more of a struggle to get through for me. Almost seemed a bit forced? That said, I think you could present the theme a bit better. One other thing, I think these pieces would flow better if you added some punctuation. Sometimes I get stuck where to pause.
But, other than that, I love this idea of your Dream Theater. Keep it up Brandon, you may end up with a nice little series here!

[Seriana]

Ok, I'm gonna be honest, this one was a bit more of a struggle to get through for me. Almost seemed a bit forced? That said, I think you could present the theme a bit better. One other thing, I think these pieces would flow better if you added some punctuation. Sometimes I get stuck where to pause.
But, other than that, I love this idea of your Dream Theater. Keep it up Brandon, you may end up with a nice little series here!

[Seriana]

Ok, I'm gonna be honest, this one was a bit more of a struggle to get through for me. Almost seemed a bit forced? That said, I think you could present the theme a bit better. One other thing, I think these pieces would flow better if you added some punctuation. Sometimes I get stuck where to pause.
But, other than that, I love this idea of your Dream Theater. Keep it up Brandon, you may end up with a nice little series here!