Remember Me

Will I be remembered

When I am gone

For what I have done

Or where I have gone

 

Will I be a thought

That you long to keep

Someone that you loved

With thoughts oh so deep

 

Ponder if you must

Thoughts of yonder year

Remember the good times

Don't let them disappear

 

Who's not to say

They will always remain

Sometimes it's love

That keeps a person sane

 

So think long and hard

What you will say

When I ask you the question

Will you remember me today

Reviews

[AleyshaRosa]

Who's not to say
They will always remain
Sometimes it's love
That keeps a person sane ----> love that. It's always said/read that love will drive you mad, but finally you've showed us the opposite of such a ridiculous idea.
When it's one of your dimmest days and all you can think to do is cry over your loss... Remembering all positive in your loss is sometimes the only cure for pain. Makes me think of this phrase

Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened.

Koodoos =]

[qaralynn]

great poem!!

[Kayleen]

its simple and meaningfull and i really like it :) i really like the picture you chose too. idk why exactly but it fits great

[SarahCortland]

This is very beautiful. It reminded me of how I feel sometiems. I find myself questioning if I will be remembered.

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

amazing poem, love it

[ebur™]

fantastic! it was a very deep poem and made you think, ponder about it alot. I especially loved the last stanza. It like emphasized and summed up everything you mentioned throughout the poem. wonderful! :)

I think that what one of the greatest fears of most people in the world are being forgotten.
I don't care if I'm not remembered for doing something important or making a difference in history, I just want to be remembered for being me.
So remember me, everybody.

[Manda]

awww i absolutely love this! its very good! wat a great little write. well expressed.

[A]

LOVE this! The flow, the message, everything! Great, great piece! :)

[MagiCrystal]