Cross Paths

“Cross Paths”

 

Walking down

The sidewalk path

One guy, One girl

You do the math

 

As you walk past

Each other that day

Your eyes will meet

And hearts lead the way

 

You'll get the feeling

As will she

Love at first sight?

Just might be

 

You say hello

As does he

You start to wonder

Does she like me?

 

So the talk begins

And continues on

Haven't hardly moved

As you stand on the lawn

 

It's one of those connections

That happens out of chance

Love at first site

Drawn in by some sort of trance

 

Later down the road

He tries to do the math

Where would they be

If they never crossed paths

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

the eyes meet..lips quiver..the heart beats..so much shiver
there is lots of wondering in each mind..each thinking on his side
is this true love..am i walking my path that i should..
is he the one who should tread with me along..between these trees
i want to ask ..but i fear everything..he is so near that why i fear
is he really the one for me..should i follow my heart
or just drop everything and turn back
who can tell..i know ..i cant
lovely work

[Ashley Lynn]

lovely image painted.

[Clouded in Hopeful Illu..]

This is such a lovely and thoughtful poem. It was easy to read and understand, but yet it had so many depths to it that it wanted me to read it over and over again. This is an amazing piece of work. Thank you so much for sharing it.


"You say hello
As does he" --- she

[Sarah]

Cute! I liked the short, simple lines & rhyme. The story captured the innocence of love, and how one event has the chance to change a person's life forever. (= Nice job!

[Lady V]

Isnt it always something strange about chance meetings. We never know just where or how our lives would change had we not wanted tea that day or didnt walk. We never know just where our paths will lead us.

Great piece.

Live, Love and Learn

Lady V

[Kelly Catherine.]

Amazing^^ If only we were all able to grasp the moment and take a chance at love. You took what most people think but dare not do, and put it into one beautiful poem. Excellent job.

-angel- ok NO!!!!! if your gonna be mushy gushy love as$ then at least do it right! ok im not Nikita Willow i'm her friend. and im a poet fro deviant art and man you suck at love writing. try being a bit more real and emotional with it and it might work.


-Nikita- i'm sorry but I have to agree... this new stuff from you isn't as good as your former more... interesting writes. Sorry We are being just alittle mean. but we only say what we are thinking. she is an experianced writer and knows alitle more than I do.

Good day and hope you have a nice day.

[Seriana]

Awwwwwww!!! How stinking cute! This made me smile, huge! Good job, Brandon. I'm digging this new stuff from you.

[Victoria Lee~]

Brandon this is so romantic and beautiful. I love it... I love how you started it and brought the piece back in a circle with the closing! I believe in fate : )

[Ale Blevins]

AS i said it is beautiful
absolutly amazing one of my favs
we all have felt this way and you where able to get it on paper,
amazing Amber-Leigh