Torment

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Sky comes crashing

My world is about to end

What am I to do

How am I to defend

 

All I've been through

Everything I've seen

Its more than I ever wanted

More than I could dream

 

Faint whispers of trust

Heavy sounds of guilt

Torment me endlessly

Like a knife through a quilt

 

So as I continue this fight

Dying more everyday

I wish there was something I could do

To make my pain go away

 

Reviews

[Pinky]

How very nice write. i love the form and ho it flows. The pain doesnt go away.... nver does.... so just learn to love the thorn in ur side so to say... hmmm or maybe a better way is to become numb to it... go just adapt to it so to say.

[The Lady Anasteja]

This one speaks, no scream with me. kudos for reaching within.

[Seriana]

Oh man, you've got it going on in this one Brandon! Where is all this coming from? I'm smiling, because you are evolving as a writer and I can clearly see it in these last few poems you've written. Nice job. This is a fav!

[The Autumn Faerie]

*sigh*
I'm sorry to say it, but I can't find the words to tell you just how much I can relate to this lately...
Actually, for the past year...
-.-

Thank you for sharing...
It's good learn I'm not alone, even though I wish this loneliness upon no one...