Last Goodbye

 

Think about

Those sleepless nights

And all the times

I’ve sat and cried

 

Times you’ve said

You were wrong

It’s like a record

And you are the song

 

Empty promises

Broken with lies

Yet you sit there

And want me to fight

 

For a love that is gone

And has been for a while

I can’t remember the last time

You have made me smile

 

Let’s do what’s right for us

And sever what’s left of the ties

Call our relationship over

And say our last goodbye

Reviews

[just is]

I can feel this and the emotion you put into this, I have been in this position before. Well written

[The Autumn Faerie]

Sometimes realizing things are over before it's too late to be civil is the hardest part...
I've certainly realized this the hard way...

Heart-breaking write...

[Kelly Catherine.]

Wow I can realy feel the emotion in your poem. I love how you made it easy to relate to while still keeping it in depth.
Nice work,
Kitti^-^

[1809 Black Plague Decem..]

I definitely agree with wildfeour, ---mishel

[Wildfleour]

Putting an end to a relationship is always so difficult, even when we know it's best for both people.

[Sarah]

Very nice write. =) This flowed well, and I loved the occasional rhyme. It was wrapped up well in the end. Great job!

[John Stussy]

It's a sad time when this occurs. Good-bye isn't an easy word to say to begin with, but to close something that was once great takes a good deal of courage.

[Seriana]

Very nice Brandon. I especially love this line:
It's like a record
And you are the song

Great little piece! Keep it up. :)

[Pinky]

Awesome write!

[MY]

I like this very much. It is different cause a lot of the love poems is are told in a different way, often with the view of the one left behind. This shows facts of reality and how a person reacts when realizing love is gone.