Last Goodbye

Last Goodbye

A Poem by Brandon

 

Think about

Those sleepless nights

And all the times

I’ve sat and cried

 

Times you’ve said

You were wrong

It’s like a record

And you are the song

 

Empty promises

Broken with lies

Yet you sit there

And want me to fight

 

For a love that is gone

And has been for a while

I can’t remember the last time

You have made me smile

 

Let’s do what’s right for us

And sever what’s left of the ties

Call our relationship over

And say our last goodbye

© 2008 Brandon


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I can feel this and the emotion you put into this, I have been in this position before. Well written

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sometimes realizing things are over before it's too late to be civil is the hardest part...
I've certainly realized this the hard way...

Heart-breaking write...

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow I can realy feel the emotion in your poem. I love how you made it easy to relate to while still keeping it in depth.
Nice work,
Kitti^-^

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I definitely agree with wildfeour, ---mishel

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Putting an end to a relationship is always so difficult, even when we know it's best for both people.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nice write. =) This flowed well, and I loved the occasional rhyme. It was wrapped up well in the end. Great job!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's a sad time when this occurs. Good-bye isn't an easy word to say to begin with, but to close something that was once great takes a good deal of courage.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nice Brandon. I especially love this line:
It's like a record
And you are the song

Great little piece! Keep it up. :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awesome write!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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I like this very much. It is different cause a lot of the love poems is are told in a different way, often with the view of the one left behind. This shows facts of reality and how a person reacts when realizing love is gone.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 28, 2008

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Brandon
Brandon

Phoenix, AZ



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Well to start off, I just started writing a little while back. I just decided to write one day out of pure boredom. Well I ended up writing 2 poems that day, and I got a very good response from them. .. more..

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