Purity Divine
A Poem by
Brandon
Your touch
A gentle caress
Your eyes
A soothing sight
Your smell
Intoxicating desire
Your face
Ever so pure
Your essence
A purity divine
© 2008 Brandon
Reviews
Simply lovely Brandon. I love the "intoxicating desire" line. That's a great way to express it. Another wonderful piece!
Posted 16 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
i really enjoyed this short, sweet, simply and to the point... great flow and uh yea.... its just a good piece!
Posted 16 Years Ago
i really enjoyed this short, sweet, simply and to the point... great flow and uh yea.... its just a good piece!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Simple and, yes, divine.
Posted 16 Years Ago
Simple and, yes, divine.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
ooooooooooooooooooooo chills lol I love it Brandon
Posted 16 Years Ago
ooooooooooooooooooooo chills lol I love it Brandon
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on May 16, 2008
Last Updated on December 31, 2008
Author
Brandon Phoenix, AZ
About
Well to start off, I just started writing a little while back. I just decided to write one day out of pure boredom. Well I ended up writing 2 poems that day, and I got a very good response from them. ..
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