Beautiful Day

Beautiful Day

A Poem by Brandon

 

Wind through the trees

Rain on the ground

Lightning in the sky

Followed by a pound

 

Thunder in the clouds

Giving you a chill

A real sight to see

Truest form of thrill

 

Rain flowing through

Down between the creek

All you see is clouds

Floating over the peaks

 

When the storm is over

And the clouds go away

All we can do is wait

For another beautiful day

 

© 2008 Brandon


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I love this! Very good descriptive words!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yay!!! I love it Brandon. I can see your writing evolving, ever so slowly with each new piece. Great job!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awesome write.... i like it a lot!

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Added on May 12, 2008

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Brandon
Brandon

Phoenix, AZ



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Well to start off, I just started writing a little while back. I just decided to write one day out of pure boredom. Well I ended up writing 2 poems that day, and I got a very good response from them. .. more..

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