Lonely Heart

 

So she sits

With a lonely heart

And wonders how

It all fell apart

 

Hour after hour

Day after day

She can’t figure out

What is left to say

 

All she wonders

Is where she went wrong

And starts to cry

As she hears their song

 

Sitting alone

Desperate for love

Hoping one day

She’ll be blessed from above

Reviews

[Pinky]

Short, sweet and deep.... nice write!

[Ale Blevins]

great poem its so sad that i know exactly how "she" feels it makes me sad to remember but its a beautiful peome def one of my favs

[Emily B]

the poor lonely heart--you've expressed it well

[Rita]

Simple, but it explains so much. I can so relate at the moment.

>_

[Mistral Bilgera]

Nice simplistic Rhyming... love the presence of melancholy in the beginning and how the poem ends with a feeling of faint optimism. =)

[Seriana]

Ahhh, perfect Brandon! Nice title, too. Good choice. Painful, yet with hope. :)