Not Here

 

As I sit

And read the header

Try not to cry

As I read your letter

 

You told me it’s been fun

Told me it’s been real

You never stopped to think

The way that I feel

 

As I went through

The words you wrote down

Tears starting falling

As I started to frown

 

The realization has hit me

The end is near

What will I do now

Now that you're not here

 

Reviews

[Kelly Catherine.]

Oh my god the exact same thing happened to me about 1 week ago exactly. We were sitting on a bus coming back from a feild trip and he sent me a note saying the exact same thing.... I'm so sorry that's like one of the most horrible feelings a person can get, but I think you did a realy good job expressing your emotions in your poem. Great job!

-Kitti^-^

[Pinky]

awesome.... great flow.... great rhyme... great piece... i enjoyed it!

[Seriana]

Another great one Brandon. I do wonder about your pain and hurt that could have caused such poems. You write them with such ease, as though it's always been with you, a part of you. I enjoyed this.

[RHEA CROSLEY]

Very well written. I lost my wife last December,2007 when she went to be with Jesus. In death no matter how close or pure the relationship there is always unanswered question, regret for how it could have been better. Something left unsaid etc.