Broken Mess

 

Crumpled, broken mess

all over the floor

tears are falling down

like an ocean on the shore

 

The olden days are gone

The times you once had

Now you sit alone

Lonely, and feeling sad

 

Pick yourself up

Don't let yourself go

You can move on from this

Just take it nice and slow

 

Life will still be waiting

When you're ready to begin

Don't get yourself stepped on

Give your heart time to mend

 

Reviews

[MysticShadows]

Your poems are so sincere. You seem like you are a wonderful person with a lot to say.

[Pinky]

Great write!!! Good job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D

[Seriana]

How nice Brandon! Such a simple message, yet very true. Another great write. :)

[Antonio Valentino]

Great advice. Good work.

Antone