I Love You

I Love You

A Poem by Brandon
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Old poem that I scrapped and completely re-wrote.

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My fingers start shaking

My hearts in a bind

I want to be with you

I want you as mine

 

I know you feel it

Running through

It’s deep inside

I feel it too

 

It’s been a while now

We both have grown

It’s been the greatest of times

I think we both know

 

Then came the day

These feelings so true

I whispered in your ear

I love you

© 2008 Brandon


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Awww!!! This is so sweet. See, why cant all boys write like this. This would make an AMAZING valentines day gift. *sigh*


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Added on April 25, 2008

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Brandon
Brandon

Phoenix, AZ



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Well to start off, I just started writing a little while back. I just decided to write one day out of pure boredom. Well I ended up writing 2 poems that day, and I got a very good response from them. .. more..

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