Inspiration

Inspiration

A Poem by Brandon

 

In all that you do

And that you say

You always inspire me

In the greatest of ways

To better myself

Just as you’ve done

To face all your fears

And never too run

I see what you do

And what you have done

It makes me fill up

Where I’m almost overcome

With the deepest respect

And heartfelt desire

It’s you I look up too

And it’s me you inspire

© 2008 Brandon


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I like it... its sweet...!!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is MUCH better! I love the way you reworked it. The flow is way better, the content cleaned up, great job! Now let's see that other one. ;)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awww...very sweet.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 25, 2008

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Brandon
Brandon

Phoenix, AZ



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Well to start off, I just started writing a little while back. I just decided to write one day out of pure boredom. Well I ended up writing 2 poems that day, and I got a very good response from them. .. more..

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