3 Words for You

 

My answer for you

Is one that is true

It hit me that day

Out of the blue

 

It drove me to feel

It drove me to say

That way that I do

That way I feel today

 

Knowing now

That our love is true

I have said mine

As a response to you

 

What comes next?

In our love that we share

As we sit thinking

With love in the air

 

What will happen?

With my next question to you

As I ask you opening

Will it be “I do”?

 

Author's Note

This is basically a response to 3 words.

Reviews

[Legion]

Okay, you have a good message going here. Now, expand on it. It seems a bit mediocre for such a grand jubilation. The typical type of love poem, so to speak. I hope that makes sense because I am not trying to say this is crap because it isn't. What I basically mean is that this should be one of your greatest moments shared, don't settle. Shout it from the mountain tops! Put it in a thousand bottles and set them loose upon the sea! According to your profile, you are new to writing. A good way to improve is to get yourself a dictionary and a thesarus and expand upon your vocabulary. Also, read as much of other peoples stuff as you can (the classics and anything new). You also don't have to use rhyme either. You can, but (once again) don't make it mediocre. Use the unusual rhymes as long as they make sense. Stay away from the typical like "love" and "dove or "door" and "floor" (unless it is extremely necessary to the piece). You seem to have great ideas, now make them grand! I hope this makes sense. Keep 'em coming.

[Seriana]

Awwwww, dang! Every time I read something of yours, my heart smiles a little. It's so....sweet! I don't know how else to put it. I really like this one. Your rhyming seems to be getting better too. :)

[Ale Blevins]

o i feel love in the air good write! ~Amber-Leigh

[Sarah]

Very cute. I love how the title implies "i love you", but it's never actually said in the poem. That's what I was expecting, so it was nice not to be right. xD Good job with the shorter lines, the meter was off in a few places, but overall, a fun read. :)