3 Words

3 Words

A Poem by Brandon

 

Only with 3 words

Words hit me like a brick

Catch me in your grasp

Wrapped around me thick

 

Taking me off feet

Like paper in the wind

Lifting me into the clouds

Putting my head into a spin

 

What could make me

Feel better than I do

What could make me higher?

The answer is you

© 2008 Brandon


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Aaawwww!!!! You made my heart get all melty. *Loving sigh* I think you explained love perfectly. The poem was titled 3 words and I think its safe to say we all know those 3 words.

Brilliant piece.

-Courtney

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"The answer is you"...LOVE that. Sigh...Good one. Short and sweet, yet so powerful. Well done!

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow very deep i love it

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the way you explain the feeling is just magnificent! great write! Amber-leigh

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 18, 2008

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Brandon
Brandon

Phoenix, AZ



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Well to start off, I just started writing a little while back. I just decided to write one day out of pure boredom. Well I ended up writing 2 poems that day, and I got a very good response from them. .. more..

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