Fear

 

Shaking at the thought

What have I done?

Where can I go?

Where will I run?

 

Don’t know where to turn

Or who to talk to

Will I get burned?

Or can I trust you?

 

What’s done is done

I’ve dug myself into a hole

How will my family come into play?

What is there role?

 

When will it go away?

Will I ever be able to go home?

If not, the question remains

Where is it I will roam?

Reviews

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

I thought i was nice, because I could relate to your idea in the poem.

What's done is done

I've dug myself into a hole

How will my family come into play?

What is their role?

I got into a lot of financial debt, dug myself so mamy holes, many times my family was there to help me, and provide support, even though i always felt they were pushing me away.

i feel you.

keep writing, and see your craft improve each day!!

[Ale Blevins]

Don't know where to turn

Or who to talk to

Will I get burned?

Or can I trust you?
i know the feeling not knowing who to trust or where to turn when you look back and want to turn around this is a great poem

[Wildfleour]

This was terrific. I feel like you should write a part two. Or sequel!