Love is an art and your poem is an art form in itself! Very beautiful and unique. Your words describe love so well...
..."The gentle kisses
The sweetest goodnight
The caressing compassion
And love at first site"
(sight)
This is lovely. I read your profile and I'm so glad you kept with the writing, you are very gifted!
Love is an art and your poem is an art form in itself! Very beautiful and unique. Your words describe love so well...
..."The gentle kisses
The sweetest goodnight
The caressing compassion
And love at first site"
(sight)
This is lovely. I read your profile and I'm so glad you kept with the writing, you are very gifted!
I truely enjoy the way this poem flows.
Very powerful.
My heart warmed as I read it.
You wove a deeply beautiful piece with rich words and powerful imagary.
Truely brilliant and inspireing to those who read it.
very nice work, I like how it calmly rhymes, and the use of commonly known metaphors so people can easily comprehend your message. Very nicely done, I agree with you full heartedly
Well to start off, I just started writing a little while back. I just decided to write one day out of pure boredom. Well I ended up writing 2 poems that day, and I got a very good response from them. .. more..