Emotionless

 

Emotionless eyes

Evil within

What have you done?

Where have you been?

Disturbing is the aura

That you have around you

How can we help?

What can we do?

You need to be saved

From the soul that is you

Even if it takes some time

Then that’s what we’ll do

Author's Note

Let me know what ya think.

Reviews

[Annebelle Ashire]

Well,
I think that you're looking through the eyes of another.
Or I could be sadly mistaken.

I think you see yourself - and you're crying out for what
you cannot reach.

It may be a completely different interpretation than you would have
expected,
but my thoughts stay with me on this.

I do believe this was a very well, put together, emotional write.
I thank you for sharing.

And with that,
I leave you to your thoughts.

[♥ Courtney &hear..]

I think it is wonderful! I love how it flows. It tells a great story too, like your saving someone you love from their self. I think its awesome. Great write... keep going :-D

-Courtney