Falling Star

 

Shades of darkness

Drowning the day

Clouds moving in

Then comes the haze

Stars will follow soon

As they always do

To brighten up the sky

And get rid of the gloom

To brighten you up

And perhaps you just might

See a falling star

And get your wish granted tonight

Reviews

[Wildfleour]

I love it and hope you join my new group and post it~

[Ashlee]

It made me wanna go outside and stare at the sky. That was a good thing. I really like the way you wrote this.

[Seriana]

Awwwww, it really made me say awwwww! That was so cute! And so short and simple. Sometimes the best poems say the most with the least amount of words. Good job!