Inside Yourself

Show me the sign

As to how will I find

The strength to move on

Now that you are gone

 

For many years you cared

Your feelings that you shared

What do I have left to say

Now that you are far away

 

I know your still there

I feel it in the air

Your leaving us so soon

It doesn’t seem fair

 

We now must move along

And think about the song

You always had playing

All of the words

And things that he was saying

Take it all inside

And know in your heart

Everything will be ok

Reviews

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

This could be a bout a break up or the loss of someone to death. Either way, it is poignant, elegant and endearing. Thank you.
Light,
Siddartha

[NCPanthersgurl]

I wish I'd had this when I was going through my first break up. It's really well written, and I had been in a time where something like this would have been encouraging.

Nice job.

[justjenn_2u]

This poem has a wonderful format. I enjoy how the word play is direct and flows smoothly. You write with such ease with no forced language.

A first read for me, of your work. Very nicely done!