Lonely

Lonely

A Poem by Brandon

 

Nobody around to care

Nobody around to share

What they think

Or what they feel

Wandering the lonely streets

Looking for a smiling face

Looking for a familiar place

Desperate for a friend

Desperate for the end

Of cloudy days

And sunless rays

And the loneliness to go away

© 2008 Brandon


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It is like walking on a park alone and quiet, and the skies are gray. One of those types of movies.

Good form, good rhythm, good choice of words.

Well painted image and well imparted message.

A good read.

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Added on April 12, 2008
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Brandon
Brandon

Phoenix, AZ



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Well to start off, I just started writing a little while back. I just decided to write one day out of pure boredom. Well I ended up writing 2 poems that day, and I got a very good response from them. .. more..

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