Never Too Late

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Gazing into the sky

Looking at the stars

Thinking about your life

And who you really are

Thinking about the past

The things that you have done

Is it a smile that you have?

Or a frown that will forever last

What have you set out to do?

What have you already done?

Are you happy with the results?

Or is it time for you to experience the fun

Of a list of dreams and goals

That was planned when you were young

Live life by the moment

And live it as a whole

 

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Reviews

[Seriana]

This piece nearly made me cry. So true...These lines:
What have you set out to do?
What have you already done?
Are you happy with the results?
got me the most. It really makes you stop and reflect. Or, if you are in the midst of not knowing, it gives you something to think about. Hope, perhaps? Nicely done.

[Jacqueline]

This piece offers hope to people who feel that they have waited too late to complete/start goals. I like the positive vibe and motivation! Good drop.

[stipe]

Not in a position to give any constructive criticism quite yet, but I relate and totally agree with "

Live life by the moment
And live it as a whole"