When You Smile

 

When you smile

I fill with glee

All my heart

And all of me

I find that place

Deep within

To open up

And let you in

In to a place

I hold so dear

When you smile

It's all so clear

 

Reviews

[Killah Cam]

Wow, this is beautifully written. It's always so hard, to make poems sound rhythmically correct, yet this is so graceful and beautiful! wonderful writing. I always find someone smile, to be one of their most important attributes. :]

btw, thanks for the review.

[larryb]

Well done once again , short sweet and simple and good....