Game of Life

Game of Life

A Poem by xNote_to_selfx

As time flies by
We forget our selves
As time flies by
We become history
Living in the present
Looking to the past
Begging for the future
Good times never last
As time flies by
We loose our selves
Victims of the present 
admirers of the past
tools for the future 
pawns in the game of life

© 2011 xNote_to_selfx


Author's Note

xNote_to_selfx
This probably isn't very good. Didn't put much though of time into it. well tell me what you think?

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"Pawns in the game of life"
I loved that line! It was creative. I never would have thought of it. For not taking much time on it, it sounds pretty good to me! Great job! :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I did enjoy this. A wonderfully short poem about how we spend our time living. Well done!

N. Strong

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like it. A couple spelling errors but it doesn't take from the poem. Thanks for sharing. I really enjoyed this :)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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