We both know

You say that you won't go

but we both know

that you'll be gone

before too long

you say that your fine

and that you'll always be mine

but we both know

you life is fading slow

we both know

it's your time to go

I look one last time at your beautiful sight,

hold my breath as yours dies and kiss you goodnight.

Author's Note

I got bored on the bus. (took about 10 mins. to write) :) enjoy

Reviews

[samurai212]

You have talent you know

[Escape My Fate]

So sad D: your amazing :) i love your poetry

[Casper]

depressing, lol. but goood. BTW WHERE ARE YOU? you not here at school make me sad D; lol

[SpokenWord]

This reminds me to always live in the moment for right now is all that exists. I wonder is this person really dying or just going to leave? I like the rhyme in your flow, good write.

[Sevendayspast]

Aww I like it!

[I'llPlayTheJuliet]

This is really.. wonderful, short and to the point.
Great job especialy for being written in 10 mins :D